Pensive poetry for a swan
“it’s imagination will be set it free”
Do you mean “its imagination will be set free” or “its imagination will set it free”? You need to delete either the word “be” or the word “it”. Also the possessive “its” doesn’t have an apostrophe. “It’s” is “it is”. Your artwork is fantastic though and the story and characters are interesting and compelling! I definitely want to see what happens next! 🙂 I thoroughly enjoyed Strays which is why I decided to read this web comic and I am glad I did! Keep up the good work!!
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