I was looking back, and I think I did not see this bit after you changed Dolim’s dialogue. (I think it was a good choice, by the way! I support your decision.)
So now I can say: “flesh market”? …oh… oh man I don’t like the sound of that.
Bad bad kitty.
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normaschthewanderer
Years later she’ll be telling their kids, “I remember when he first said ‘Let her go Ghebrian!'”
VelaBee
I was looking back, and I think I did not see this bit after you changed Dolim’s dialogue. (I think it was a good choice, by the way! I support your decision.)
So now I can say: “flesh market”? …oh… oh man I don’t like the sound of that.
Bad bad kitty.
5/14/24
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Never expected, greatly appreciated ♥
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